Other than that, it could use some paragraphs. Overall just clean up everything and make sure there you come off as professional."OK Construction has been providing high quality contractor services to the greater New York area in both the residential and commercial construction industries for year!"
Thank you.No comments on the company name yet, (so I will).
I immediately thought you were from Oklahoma, until I saw the New York in the text. As a NY consumer on the internet, I would have glanced past your company figuring you are 1500 miles away.
And if I was looking for a relatively good contractor, I would dismiss your company if the best way you could be described is just OK.