Change
Maybe?
"Everyone Loves a Beautiful Lawn"
I would remove the $7 - $10 per sq ft. You need to get the customer curious enough to call, hot enough to buy, then then discuss price. Wow!!! $63 per yard! I didn't know it costs that much!
10 reasons to buy is not necessary and too many to read. I think I would list 3 of the best reasons. This would give you more room to write with larger print that would be easier to read.
I would remove the 3 pictures in the circles because at the time of delivery these are not critical and should be discussed only in the sales presentation.
Rather that the sq ft price I would offer a 20% to 50% season special discount or some type of discount that sounds real and reasonable.
The special discount has to have an expiration date with a reasonable enough time to make the decision to call.
The, "Give Us A Call" has no value and can be entirely eliminated.
I think lawn and fences are the most critical things that make the difference regarding the values of homes for entire neighborhoods. There could be an ego factor with a before picture, after picture, and corresponding home values $$$.
I would remove the, "Learn How Your Lawn Can Always Be Green." Everyone already knows that artificial lawns are always green (unless I am missing something about what you are selling). I would change the words to something that expresses the fact that the lawns are green during summer, winter, spring, and fall, or year round, etc.
I like to read my advertising for several days, remove every word that is not necessary, and change words to those that either sound better, or make the most sense