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Originally Posted by Teetorbilt
A single paragraph is really difficult to read especially when it is covering so many different subjects. I get lost and that takes some doing.
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I concur.
That reminded me when my kids were in second grade writing essays and I would pull my hair out trying to make them understand they need to start a new paragraph to let the reader know were now on a new subject
I agree. I guess it was somewhat jumbled. Maybe it was because it was bedtime, or I just fell victum to forumitus.
Ironically, I never made less than a B on essays in college.
An apple to you both!
P.S. Seems I hesitate spelling some words also. I put this off on age, less reading of the printed word and more reading on the internet.