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Old 01-15-2008, 03:00 PM   #21
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Since 1/1/08 i have had 97 hit's and they are only viewing the first page. No one is looking further than that. Mine is not a .com and i built it myself. I'm definately not a web genius or a writer. I can put your cabinet doors back on or fix that hole in your drywall. Can't seem to get this website thing right though.
Quick suggestions to improve your site's effectiveness wizendwizard:
  • There needs to be more contrast with your font header colors. Blue on black is hard to read, that I can barely see your phone number.
  • The homepage copy needs to be convincing and focus on your target markets needs. For instance, your specialty is sunrooms, try something like, "Picture yourself bathing in the warmth of a sunlit room from within the comfort of your home. Adept Home Repair will make your vision a reality, for an estimate call us today" It focuses on your customers by speaking to them directly using "you" and has a clear call to action.

    Hope that helps, good luck!

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Old 01-15-2008, 03:56 PM   #22
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Quick suggestions to improve your site's effectiveness wizendwizard:
  • There needs to be more contrast with your font header colors. Blue on black is hard to read, that I can barely see your phone number.
  • The homepage copy needs to be convincing and focus on your target markets needs. For instance, your specialty is sunrooms, try something like, "Picture yourself bathing in the warmth of a sunlit room from within the comfort of your home. Adept Home Repair will make your vision a reality, for an estimate call us today" It focuses on your customers by speaking to them directly using "you" and has a clear call to action.

    Hope that helps, good luck!
Thanks for the advice, as i stated " i am not much of a writer". I am talking with a friend at an ad agency about content. Will eventually get things right.
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