Company Resume...Need Some Advice And Suggestions

nycballer31488

Hey guys hows it going. I recently wrote up a resume for my company that i intend to submit to the School Construction Authority for some work on some of the school projects in my area. My company is run by me and my two sons. I never worked for the city before but they offer larger prajects which will help me develop and expand my company further. My company is a general construction company but we specialize in waterproofing and masonry restoration because these jobs seem most proiftable for our company. So i would like your professional opinions and suggestions how i should either alter or add more to my resume before i sub it it. Greatly appreciated guys.


Objective
To expand and provide professional general Contracting services to government, commercial and residential clients in search of experience and expertise in the construction industry.
Summary of Expertise and Qualifications
Water Proofing and Masonry Restoration New Construction
All phases of roofing Excavation/ Demolition
Interior Remodeling New additions
Structural engineering

Ø Professional general contractor with extensive knowledge throughout all major construction fields with more than 50 years of combined experience.
Ø Highly recognized for providing professional prompt service with quality results while expanding our clientele database along with a track record of customer satisfaction.
Ø Controlled safety on all sites is one of our top priorities therefore allowing all projects to progress smoothly, consistently, and within the budget.
Ø Use most up to date equipment along with the most productive methods of project management allowing projects to be more cost effective well paced.
Ø Our Sites included dedicated personnel keeping the site clean as well as well organized therefore promoting employee safety along with professionalism.

Professional Experience
Gee Bee and Son’s L.L.C. . New York, N.Y.
Locally based Construction Company serving the government, corporate, business and private clients on small and large scale projects. We handle all phases of the business including hiring and firing employees along with sub-contractors, supervision and liability of all employees working under our company, estimation, bid and contract negotiation, equipment and material management, and in field construction management. Our Company has experience in working with land marks and in compliance with New York Department of Buildings codes. Our Projects include but are not limited to:
Ø Complete building masonry and waterproofing restoration.
Ø Structural engineering and reinforcement.
Ø Roofing.
Ø New construction development.
Ø Demolition and Excavation.
Ø New additions to existing structure.
Ø Interior remodeling.

woodmagman

Better kkk

nycballer31488

thanks man your feedback is greatly appreciated. Anyone else care to subit their opinions.

SLSTech

50 years combined exp? What 50 guys @ 1 year, 2 @25, or what? It means nothing & is kinda of a joke
Experience working with landmarks - which ones?
How do you excavate a roof?

Look at a professionals resume - experience they show companies (or in your case locations) they have worked at. Imagine this had someones name on it & they were coming to get a job from you? Would you hire them? Why would anyone else?

You need 5 items - who we are, what we do, where we have been, when all the above took place, and finally HOW we can help you (How we can help you is generally in a cover letter - but it still applies)

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rbsremodeling

Throw it in the trash. I get faxed emailed, carrier pigeon, 20 of those a week.

I just dump them in the can

Take a deep breath. Why do I need you, what makes you different?

On your resume your Text and ideas has to be original. It has to not look like the flock.

That looks like every other crappy Resume I have seen for the last year

What can you do to really, really make me want to stop and read your resume or better yet call your company.

Pink paper? funny joke to start it off?? There has to be something unique?

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nycballer31488

i appreciate your honesty and insight that use have provided me with. It was quite an eye opener. It led me to retro fit another Resume which i hope is much better then the first but still needs improvement. Im looking to target larger scale jobs rather then home owners. Let me hear it guys. Would you hire me provided with my resume ?

nycballer31488

Not exaxtly how it looks in microsoft. A little neater much more organzied with pages breaks making it looking more professional but all the information pretty much the same. any opinions ?

nycballer31488

Anyone else interested in providing me with their knowledge and expertise ? Opinions and suggestions ?