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Old 04-19-2009, 01:07 PM   #1
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Old 04-20-2009, 05:32 PM   #2
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Where do I start
I dont mean to go off on a rant but

You need to proof read your copy there are numerous places where you did not capitalize etc. Specifically in your copy you capitalize the first two works of the company name and not the remodeling. In one place you call yourselves Moy constructions.
If you are going to show a bathroom and decide to prominantly display the toilet supply A) use something other than a garden hose supply. if you insist on using a garden hose at least make it the correct length if the correct length cannot be obtained at least fold the bend behind the tiolet. Take 30 seconds to remove the label from said garden hose.
Spend some money and have projects professionally photographed the quality of your photos is horrible.
Add more testimonials there is only one or change tab to testimonial
Unless you want every one to shop you on price take out the testimonial that highlights that the price was good all you will get are people who want a cheap price


That's just my opinion I could be wrong
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Old 04-20-2009, 05:35 PM   #3
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I recommend starting by changing the logo & title. My 1st impression was that it should be for a haunted-house attraction website.
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Old 04-20-2009, 06:17 PM   #4
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Hey decent site! I don't really read the content when asked to look at a website on this forum. Others do that for me. hehe

Anyways the site layout is nice and navigation is easy as well.

I do agree that something should be done about graphic design of your marquee. Its like the rest of the web site out classes it.

Get a graphics artist to redo it to mix well with the theme of your site so it looks like it belongs on the page.
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Old 04-20-2009, 11:04 PM   #5
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Thanks guys I'll start doing some changes in the next few days.
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Old 04-21-2009, 07:12 AM   #6
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Get your Analytics and Verifier code in the header. Get them from Google.
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Old 04-21-2009, 06:04 PM   #7
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I agree with naptown, you need a copywriter. You can be #1 on Google, but if the content is not compelling, it's a hallow victory. On your translator, is this machine translated? I suspect it is. That's not a good idea. If you want to have a bilingual site, I can certainly understand, but you should write it in one language and have it translated by a human.

If you want to see how bad those translators are, find a site in a foreign language, and use Google to translate it.
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